Great pose and sensual!

Like the high contast from the light source onto her arm/face.

I think putting the model more off center (suggesting to crop a chunck from left) would enhance the overall impression and composition. Aim for a 2 by 3 ratio!

I would also add a thin frame.

This is what I was thinking of: http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b319/moserBUCKET/temp/mandeebw_asif_iqbal_mod.jpg

This seems a bit overexposed(maybe intentionally) but I really love the overall feeling top marks

feel free to comment on my photos too
Jasen

I agree with Patrick and really liked the cropped version he did!
This one is very good too, a bit overexp. but I think that was the idea!

the centered composition works VERY well for me!
The highlights are a bit overexposed , that's little distracting, but this one is a great work!!!
I love it! +9

agree with moser...however nice work...

I think it's ok Great work

Nice contrast!

agree moserArtist!

Very nice high contrast!....great mood!
I would place her a little more to the left.
Carlos

Great mood, nice model, very sexy pose; agree with Moser about the compo...!!

personally I would have allowed more light onto her back as her BUM looks square in this photo.. its not curved almost a right angle..

Its also overexposed and girl needs to be mve form the centre of the frame...

Beautiful!! Great idea and capture!!

Beautiful shot.

Gr8 contrast and comp +9

Nice capture.

Nice one.

Love the dark room
Very sensual. I like how she fades into the darkness.
Very alluring.

+10
Rae