Beautiful capture!!! Love the details!!

Interesting combination here: the microphone and cigarette do suggest an "old school" feel, but the cropping seems very modern. I like that. The way her body is cut off creates a dismembered/disjointed look that works well, IMO, but I would like to see a little more space above her eyes, mainly because the left one is so very close to the edge it makes my eyelashes twitch.

The composition and crop works for me apart from the eyes being slightly cut.

Maybe just a tiny bit more of that eye.

Cool and beautiful chica!

Cool!!!! absolute superb shot!! (apart from the cropping ) on the left and the upper side, it is too tight croped .

else an excellent work!! I'd love to give you top marks for this :/ but because of the cropping it is only a +9

greets Lenny

I liked it but I have to agree with Patrick! When I look to a portrait The first think I try to find is the eyes! and I like to see them to capture or understand the photo mood. I can get the mood but it would be really better if you hadn't cropped so close to the eye.

Nice shot, but i think you should have aimed abit to the left and up so the microphone wouldn´t be so centered and the eye problem would have desapeared...!!!
Beatiful lighting, also should try to capture more details on the smoke but that is to much to ask....!!!

Very beautiful. I also see a dreamy white glow effect (or is that just me?) Well it worx anyway Good stuff

good shot.
agree with Lenn0 about the cropping.

nice picture, nice lighting and mood
the crop is a bit tight thought
+8

Very nice composition!....great mood!
Carlos

She's got attitude. My wish would be for more sultry smoke.

Great mood. Well done.

nice done...i like the paint effect

Nice photo. I think it's too tightly cropped at the top though. Nice tones in the reds, but the whites are a bit blown.

Very nice

nice pose